I am a Year 6 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 1 and my teacher is Ma Paki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Jed. It's great to see you completing work in class. I like the space ship but I think we need to make it more relative to our kura. Next time you could an adjective to your title to make it more interesting for your readers. Nice one Jed.
Kia ora Jed. It's great to see you completing work in class. I like the space ship but I think we need to make it more relative to our kura. Next time you could an adjective to your title to make it more interesting for your readers. Nice one Jed.
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